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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Such truths as this are held timeless throughout history; the questions, the answers, the mysteries of when and how life repeats itself in cycles of happiness and defeat Tears fall freely flowing into wells of humanity, some caused by joy and others by pain somewhere past misery trying to gain a balance, a certain somewhere in between the past, the present all blend into dreams and into reality, we awaken learning from paths, previously taken... such truths as this remain, timeless. seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it! Write on! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Excellent, I love this to... a wonder of insight and fuel for the soul |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
By you reminding us of these timeless truths theyare kept alive and the the flame birns longer in the mind, enjoyed..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Wow... Excellent work of art! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wow, thank you guys so much for the enthusiastic replies! I am glad that you enjoyed. Hugs ya'll |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How you've grown...  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Momma Sunshineyone....  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
May I just ditto what Karilea said? Wonderful write Donna. Love ya lady~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a balance, a certain somewhere in between that's life for me right now.. searching for that balance Good Write Donna ( give April a hug for me) hugs M |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
 Thats a great write oddly I think that Untitled, titles it very well. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
a balance, a certain somewhere in between the past, the present all blend into dreams ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh my, you're reading my mind.... and writing just as beautiful as ever!! Hugs to you, Donna~ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a balance, a certain somewhere in between the past, the present all blend into dreams and into reality, we awaken learning from paths, previously taken... such truths as this remain, timeless. -- you say it so well donna....hugssss you  And so it those we live with |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"the past, the present all blend into dreams and into reality, we awaken learning from paths, previously taken... such truths as this remain, timeless." A beauty! Perfect, perfect, perfect! JL |
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terasinas Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 91Michigan ... The Great Lakes |
Lovely write Gentle, very well done and great insights too. Thank you for sharing tera |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
That is so true! And there inlies the beauty of it all, the balance inbetween. Nice write. Kristabell |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It is not easy to balance....yet this poem does it quite well. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I really miss being able to be here, but had to pop in this morning quick to say thank you to each of you for leaving your thoughts and words. Much appreciate it. |
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