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Huan Yi
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0 posted 03-21-2006 09:50 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


In dim gray light
The ridges and valleys
In sheets disclosed

Portraits on the walls
Open their eyes
On shoes and clothes
Strewn randomly
Across the floor

You lie still asleep
A breast rising and falling
Gently as you breathe

Life into this love we share
In dreams a part
Of who we are


© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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with you


1 posted 03-21-2006 11:51 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

WOW!

This is beyond fantastic!

A total keeper
curiouse
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2 posted 03-22-2006 07:50 AM       View Profile for curiouse   Email curiouse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for curiouse

this poem is wonderfully intimate and deep it's a great read and believe me it is beyond fantastic. oh i'm curiose about where you got your name from "haun yi" because there are a lot of backgrounds or just imagination that it could be from
Huan Yi
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3 posted 03-22-2006 08:40 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Huan Yi


Thank you both


Curiouse, Huan Yi was a 14th Century Chinese
musician who created "Three Variations on a
Theme of Plum Blossoms" of which I have
through CD purchases several performances.


Again Thanks

John

curiouse
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4 posted 03-22-2006 10:27 AM       View Profile for curiouse   Email curiouse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for curiouse

thanx for that it thought it had somthing to do with chinese any way i love your poetry and hope to read more
love
me
xxx
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on the threshold of a dream


5 posted 03-23-2006 04:36 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I feel I've peeked and seen something not for my eyes... but can't regret the knowing. *S* Lovely!!!
terasinas
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6 posted 03-30-2006 04:01 AM       View Profile for terasinas   Email terasinas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit terasinas's Home Page   View IP for terasinas

... Lovely

tera
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definite keeper!
Drauntz
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everything is going to wake now.
spring, spring, spring!

beautiful
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