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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-03-21 08:00 AM


From out the Mist

From out the mist of time she came
One evening in a dream of get
An Eve of nude with flowing frame
Stood in dew drops mornings let

A flower in the purest sense
Mature of nectar full of Mel
Each breath I breathed became intense
And brought my passions up from hell

Let from heaven, stars above
An Angel in her presence
Symbols dove that turns to love
A cauldron full of essence

The tender wile of the blender
There was no toll upon this beach
Cloaked in graces lovely splendor
I could not move beyond her reach

I hovered in this dream of store
But could not touch illusions awe


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2006-03-21 08:55 AM



Perhaps it is your dreams that are your reality ~ and your waking hours be the illusion.

You rise from the mists of time,
Dear master of whim and rhyme.

Love & Misty Light,
EA
Flowers

scorpio
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right...there
2 posted 2006-03-21 10:43 AM


A stirring write Sy.  Keep on dreaming.  Well done!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-03-21 10:59 AM


FROM OUT OF THE DEPTHS
OF YOUR FERTILE POET MIND
ANOTHER GREAT PIECE

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

cody 2
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london
4 posted 2006-03-21 12:33 PM


you allways write with such passion, i enjoy
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-03-21 12:42 PM




What's this? Another gentle beauty? Sir, you move my heart and so early in the morning too.


Enchantress
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6 posted 2006-03-21 12:45 PM


A most beautiful write dear Sy!
Much enjoyed the read and the smile it gave me.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

LeeJ
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7 posted 2006-03-21 12:46 PM


From out the mist of time she came
One evening in a dream of get
An Eve of nude with flowing frame
Stood in dew drops mornings let


this is proof of your poetic marvel...

profound!!!

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8 posted 2006-03-21 01:09 PM


Now from that I can assume you are still a man very much alive and kicking   Lovely Sy.
Honeybunch
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9 posted 2006-03-21 03:00 PM


I think Earth Angel may be right because love is important "over there".  Lovely write!
iliana
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10 posted 2006-03-21 04:22 PM


mmmmm.....mmmmmm.....mmmmmm -- delicious imagery, Sy, and wonderful to read!   ....jo
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11 posted 2006-03-21 06:54 PM


superbly done,  ain't it fun when we dream?
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2006-03-21 07:16 PM


Earth Angel
Perhaps you are right. Hugs

scorpio
I'll do that. Thank you.

Interloper
Thank you my friend.

cody 2
Without passion there would be no poetry.

Lady
A beautiful reply, thank you.

Nancy
Thank you sweety.

LeeJ
You are such a generous commentor.

Sharon
Alive yes but not doing much kicking. LOL

Honeybunch
Lovely reply, thank you.

iliana
mmmmmmmmmm thank you.

Magnus
Well it is for me. LOL

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