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bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

0 posted 2006-03-21 12:57 PM



                  Words are merely symbols...
                  little comfort can they bring,
                    when the heart is breaking
                and the soul is filled with pain.
                                
                Though it's hard to find one happy                              thought
                       on a day that's sad,
                  we know his will is always done
                       and it is never bad.
                                
                The breeze so gently sways a rose...
                     the eye admires this so,
                  yet underneath, in thorny bed,
                  the wind there too does blow.
                                
                    A sunrise is so wonderful...
                   our souls uplift in praise
                  but we would never witness one
                    if night-time stayed away.
                                
               So may this hill that you must climb
                place you nearer heaven's throne.
               And may each tear that you must cry
                   hold peace, soon to be born.
                                


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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2006-03-21 02:10 AM


I liked this one very much!  I'm sure your Mother must, too.  
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-03-21 01:41 PM





"A sunrise is so wonderful...
our souls uplift in praise
but we would never witness one
if night-time stayed away."

Excellent poem Bubbles. It's hard to write of mothers without being trite but you've done it.


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