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Kathy
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0 posted 2006-03-21 12:48 PM



I know I'm the lucky one
to have
a friend - like you.
Yet, I know you're not the one
to tell me what to do.

You know my story.
You know my pain.
You know my glory.
You know my shame.
You've seen my worst days,
you've seen my best,
listen close...
now hear the rest!

If you only knew that girl.
If you only knew what hazel can eyes say.
If you only knew that girl,
then you'd only, then you'd only, say...

If you only hold her close.
If you only tell her that you need her so.
If you only make the most
of the time you spend with her.

I been here, baby,  for so long
you know, I'm leaving...
even though I'll be gone away,
I know you know this feeling.

You know my story.
You know my pain.
You know my glory.
You know my shame.
You've seen my worst days,
you've seen my best,

© Copyright 2006 Kathy Jenkins - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2006-03-21 09:43 AM


I liked this, sounds almost like a song
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2 posted 2006-03-21 12:54 PM



Ah Kathy! Your musician side is showing and I like it a lot. Excellent. I love your subject.


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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-03-21 01:04 PM


1derful write!  I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

curiouse
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england
4 posted 2006-03-21 03:06 PM


it was fantastic and true which is fantastic because it's relateable you are very talented.


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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2006-03-25 08:10 AM



A wonderful song, Kathy.

Enjoyed all of this...


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