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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-03-19 12:21 PM


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Feedback to Belief

19 March 2006


Could praise be the reason
this way of invitation forth
A movement to belief
of a yesterday yet born

The birth of tomorrow
another place in time
Not to know to be known
another week to proclaim

Death to depart
words in thought
Not as sentence
or charges to caught

Throwing tantrums
mixed up in attitude
Maybe not to be kind
neither to be rude


“But we are bound to give thanks alway to God for you,
brethren beloved of the Lord, because God hath from
the beginning chosen you to salvation through
sanctification of the Spirit and belief of the truth:”
2 Thessalonians 2: 13 KJV



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Broken
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since 2000-03-12
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1 posted 2006-03-19 09:54 AM



"The birth of tomorrow
another place in time
Not to know to be known
another week to proclaim"

Loved this verse, you have a talent with rhyme.


"Base not your joy upon the deeds of others, for what is given can be taken away."

Peter Steele

poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-03-19 04:30 PM


Thank you for your comments

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