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wounded eagle
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since 2005-12-24
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0 posted 2006-03-18 05:29 PM



I march to the sound of drums,
Beating out the songs of war.
For freedom and peace, I fight,
With God's help, I implore.

I open my heart to my enemy,
For I have seen the glory of the Lord.
As he now walks beside me,
I shall lay down my sword.

I will still fight for freedom,
I will still fight for peace.
No weapons, will I carry,
Only my words, to make them cease.

Until the last moment,
With the final breath I take,
I will continue the battle,
For all humanities sake.

Now I have found the true
Peace and freedom I seek.
As I make my way to heaven,
To sit at God's feet.
  

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-03-18 05:33 PM


A most excellent write!
Welcome to Passions.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-03-18 06:03 PM


I enjoyed the theme and your presentation. thank you, for sharing your heartbeat.
D.Lester Young
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3 posted 2006-03-18 06:38 PM


I enjoyed the content's meaning of this poem.
The Lady
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-03-18 11:55 PM




Very enjoyable read.


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