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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-03-18 06:53 AM


Sealing Truth

I swallow my pain,
wanting to soothe the ache
never knowing,
always putting a hold
on my glimpse of tomorrow...

Each, a penalty for the years
of golden touch
when my cup runneth over,
"ever-engaged" in a loving world.

I am eternal in reach
where the air of silence warms me
and I walk in someone else's shoes
mine becoming unglued
from a daily kicking
of negative thoughts.

Words spun me around,
a dizzying effect clinging
to an already off balanced mood,
but it's the memories and the realness of
that leaves its touch
to seal the truth.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Buttons
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since 2006-02-27
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1 posted 2006-03-18 07:08 AM


nice poem, but sad; You write well.
StevenS
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L. A. (Lower Alabama)
2 posted 2006-03-18 07:29 AM


Nakedthoughts I'm sending you a hug! :-)Truth is what we believe it to be at the moment. I've found truth has layers and the absolute lies deep within. Heres hoping you hear the bluebird singin today! :-)
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2006-03-18 07:37 AM


Buttons, thank you..it's not all sad..I  have good warming thoughts sealed within.

Steven, I have had the flu this past week so I am just writing...most of my poems have nothing much to do with real sadness..they are just feelings that can change at any moment for me or thoughts that inspire me...
not necessarily how I personally feel.

I am waiting for that warm weather to liven me up though
thank you
M

StevenS
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4 posted 2006-03-18 07:55 AM


Sorry M, I do the same thing!
Rex Allen McCoy
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5 posted 2006-03-18 08:59 AM


Nice writing but I must say ... not always a good idea to seal away the pain

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2006-03-18 09:11 AM


I guess Rex I didn't come across right on this one at the end..I seal away the truth
(that which does take away the day's sadness and pain)
for I know the truth of my past

Thanks
M

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