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StevenS
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0 posted 2006-03-18 06:47 AM


Dawn found me a travler,
excitement within my breast.
Broken chains lay at my feet,
before me lay a quest.

A mighty man stood beside me,
and maidens fair stood too.
Together we asked the God of Love,
to tell us what to do.

"Set sail upon the sea of Love," He said,
"You'll find it never ends.
My spirit will guide you along,
and make you more than friends."

We pondered what before us lay,
and the ashes that lay behind.
We thought upon all we had lost,
and what we hoped to find.

In fragile vessel's of flesh and blood,
in vessel's of bone and clay.
We sailed off together,
to find a better way.

[This message has been edited by StevenS (03-18-2006 11:45 AM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2006-03-18 06:57 AM


"Set sail upon the sea of Love," He said,
"You'll find it never ends.
My spirit will guide you along,
and make you more than friends."


love the way you put this Steven

M

StevenS
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2 posted 2006-03-18 08:08 AM


Thank you Naked thoughts, I can't shake the feeling there just has to be more to life than this. I'm leaving no stone unturned!:-)
Enchantress
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3 posted 2006-03-18 09:14 AM


YES!!  YES!  Yes!

*Speechless*  

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

StevenS
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4 posted 2006-03-18 09:27 AM


Thank you Enchantress, I have come to believe love is more than an emotion, it's a way of life! I'm trying hard to take my first steps along that path. It's what the world needs a lot more of! :-)
Sunshine
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5 posted 2006-03-18 09:54 AM


quote:
I have come to believe love is more than an emotion, it's a way of life!

You just won the game of Bingo, Steven.  Amazing that we are never to old to learn very important lessons in life.  Thank you for sharing this bit of Dawn.


Earth Angel
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6 posted 2006-03-18 10:45 AM


May this next leg of your life's journey be a joyous one filled with love and Light!

A wonderful piece of spirit writing!

God bless you!

Hugging you!
Linda

StevenS
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7 posted 2006-03-18 11:09 AM


Thank you Sunshine, you mean I'll still be able to learn when I'm 30? :-)

Earth Angel, your blessing and hugs are soooo appreciated! I've learned a many a lesson from your generous pen. Thank you!:-)

Sunshine
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8 posted 2006-03-18 11:21 AM


Even when you finally turn 25, sir...




XOx Uriah xOX
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9 posted 2006-03-18 11:07 PM


Excellent !!     This is just beautiful!  Thank you for this blessing .    In a long list of Life's blessings, far too numerous for me to count, I do know that...you are on that list. 1st page too.  LOL    You Rock Hoss !!!!
Rainbowdust
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10 posted 2006-03-19 06:01 AM


"In fragile vessel's of flesh and blood,
in vessel's of bone and clay.
We sailed off together,
to find a better way."

Steve, indeed, there is more to this life than a lot of people can see, and I applaud your commitment to finding it! Bon Voyage!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Klassy Lassy
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11 posted 2006-03-19 10:11 AM


It is a journey of faith and spirit, is it not?  As one of my favorite authors (Richard Bach) puts it, "The IS has imagined it much so better than we have," which leaves so much room for excitement and amazement!  Love is the ONE essence that never leaves us where it finds us.  Thank you for sharing.

~ Klassy    

StevenS
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12 posted 2006-03-19 10:42 AM


How about 25x25 Shunshine?:-)

Uriah, I also know that you and I don't want to be sailin alone! I believe that all those who peel that onion we call Love will find the same truth that we have. That when your cup runs over, you get a bigger cup. You are a blessing yourself my brother! :-)

Thank you Rainbowdust, May that light that is Love forever light your path and mine!:-)

A quest that brings all that is good a little closer with every step. A journey that just cannot be made alone. A journey that needs a Klassy Lassy! :-)

Martie
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13 posted 2006-03-19 03:20 PM


Steven

Love is a most worthy cause to follow!!  

The Lady
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14 posted 2006-03-19 04:15 PM




Seems as if you've triggered a lot of feelings with this one Steven.

"We are the boat, we are the sea, I sail in you, you sail in me"
       ~ Lorre Wyatt

I believe you have charted your course on a great adventure if you sail for love. Wonderful work.

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