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bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
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Bloomington, IN

0 posted 2006-03-18 04:36 AM


Walking backward in a dream
between the after brow
of tomorrow's yesterday
encircled by some now,


I saw the the flattened memories
of all that was to come
and heard the whispers of the past,
beneath a tulip's thumb.

Then,

for a fleeting second
I ALMOST KNEW MY NAME
But, then the cursed truth crashed down...

I was here before I came.

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-03-18 07:09 AM


something about this touches me..not sure  why but will come back later...

M

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2006-03-18 09:46 AM


Enjoyed this . . . re-incarnation?  déjà vu?  time-flight?  mind-fun?

- Owl

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-03-18 10:25 AM


I am very intrigued by this write. I have read it several times and am fascinated by all the possible interpretations that I could come up with. It appears Owl and I are of the same mind! lol

This was a gem of a write! ~ Made me ponder and postulate!

Warm hug,
EA

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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Virginia
4 posted 2006-03-18 04:28 PM


YES !!!!    ::smiles::    Fantastic!
bubblesleave
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5 posted 2006-03-18 11:06 PM


THANK YOU ALL!!!!
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