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Huan Yi
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0 posted 03-17-2006 05:37 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


over fields
of last night’s snow—

the white house
silent

leafless branches
sway in the cold

no dog in the yard
the picture window darkened

in town
a car or two comes and goes

the storefronts stare
with vacant eyes

like someone
who has been crying
for much too long      


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 03-17-2006 08:44 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

stopping in to

*touch the screen*
curiouse
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2 posted 03-22-2006 12:47 PM       View Profile for curiouse   Email curiouse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for curiouse

love your poem love you
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Deep in the heart


3 posted 03-22-2006 02:10 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

I love it!  write on!
iliana
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4 posted 03-22-2006 02:37 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Sounds like my home town and my mom's house in the midst of winter.  Very vivid.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 03-22-2006 11:26 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...James
terasinas
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6 posted 03-30-2006 04:11 AM       View Profile for terasinas   Email terasinas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit terasinas's Home Page   View IP for terasinas

I too have thought such ... you put it so nicely though. Amazing how such seemingly insignificant, even meaningless perceptions, can be seen differntly, so that all things hold some meaning ... nice write ... I enjoyed the view, ty

tera
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good one...enjoyed
Drauntz
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too calm for a title of "Her".

or sad her.
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