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Open Poetry #37

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JulieAnn
Senior Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2006-03-17 05:14 PM

Ja Jake don't like patty cake
thumbs and pinkies
piggies stinkies
tub of bubbles
Daddy's stubbles
Mommy sifting
through the rubble

~~Kings' Angel~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-03-17 06:57 PM

This is adorable!
Welcome home!

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

2 posted 2006-03-19 12:56 PM

adorable or cute, I am not sure if I mean the poem, your picture, or both

an interesting choice of words in the poetic web of life

a poet who cares

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2006-03-19 11:20 PM

Interesting. I like this one. I am not sure if it is serious or cute I read it as either way. oh well enjoyed the seemingly lightheartedness

-Juju

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JulieAnn
Senior Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

4 posted 2006-03-23 01:26 PM

Thank you for your replies.
Serious, yes, as it was meant to be
I miss my son more than any poem could express.
Thnx again.
Julie

~~Kings' Angel~~

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