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tatalinia
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0 posted 2006-03-14 06:11 PM



Fallen to the death of my past
my pain and damage I punish you for
Loving you so much but mistrust
I ruin our relationship
I know it all goes downhill from here
it pains me because of the end
You think I hate you, don't love you
feel as if I control you
My love for you is deep but no longer
will I weep for fear of your absence
I shall set you free to find the path
you long for
Happiness I could never give you
or fulfill your needs
My heart is sick , my mind is a mess
there is no cure for a ruined soul as mine
No doctor can help me nor can your hold
Away I go for I have abused you enough
Love me no more for all I give is hope
But there is no hope for a damaged heart
left outside to freeze
No heat can melt it back again
take my frozen heart as you may
return it to its keeper

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

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1 posted 2006-03-14 11:18 PM


Love me no more for all I give is hope
But there is no hope for a damaged heart

.....please....say there is.....


Beautiful poetry does help, and this is one of those!

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nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2006-03-18 10:59 AM


I remember thinking these thoughts at one time...

good write

M

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