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Open Poetry #37

Could Be.....

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2006-03-23 03:16 AM

You could be... Everything I'll ever need.
You could be... All I've dreamed a love could be.
You could be... The reason I live and breathe....
Or... you could be the death of me.

I could... Remove the walls I've built around my heart.
I could... Open up and let your light shine in.
I could... Feel the forgotten ecstasy of Cupid's dart...
Or... the pain I swore I'd never feel again.

I grow dizzy when our eyes meet... that's all I know.
Something about you takes away my breath.
Your lips could be breathing life back into my soul...
Or... it could be the kiss of death.

The hopeful could-be's outweigh all fears and doubt.
Experiencing you is the only way I'll see.
Come what may... I'm willing to find out...
I'll walk in faith... to see what we could be.

I would rather live and maybe wish to die again
Than to die and never know what could have been.

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-03-23 03:58 AM

Really enjoyed this Larry, I like your conclusion!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2006-03-23 09:15 AM

Bravo, dear brave of heart! Live life to the fullest! Embrace it and accept what comes your way!

Yes! Life if for the living!

Loved the spirit of this right write!

Giving you an extra big hug!
EA

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-03-23 09:22 AM

a great remake of "it is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all!"
I truly enjoyed the read!

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2006-03-23 10:11 AM

Very powerful Larry...the "what ifs" in life is what kills us...wonderful insight on the fear of falling in love.

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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