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OwlSA
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0 posted 2006-03-14 03:25 PM


FRAGILE DREAMS
8 January 2001

Butterfly summers drifting into
dreams whispers lifting
shimmering dragonfly
watercolour wings
blown cold and wan and still in my winter heart
by the arctic chill of
your lies killing.

- Owl

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (03-21-2006 09:47 PM).]

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El_Campeador
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1 posted 2006-03-14 03:56 PM


Good imagery. Thank you for sharing this.
miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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2 posted 2006-03-14 05:14 PM


Wow!  Love the imagery of this and how it sets the mood.  Fragile dreams, yes.

misce

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-03-14 05:41 PM




Shimmery and shivery and oh, so beautiful Diana.


OwlSA
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4 posted 2006-03-17 11:30 PM


Thank you El_Campeador, miscellanea and Kate, for your kind words.

- Owl

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