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cinnabar Junior Member
since 2006-03-10
Posts 33Lot et Garonne, France. |
Love is not counted In years, but measured By the moments that glance Against a man's soul; Making it quiver and quicken, Like a butterfly's new wings In the early summer sun. The touch of your fingertips Would carry me a season; The lightest brush of your lips Would be reason enough To lay aside my fears, And sell my life, to be with you, For the briefest breath of time. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Talk about a beautiful love write! Sheesh, the lucky lady! And thank you so much, for visiting my poetry today, and commenting. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superb, inspiring...makes me want to write something simply delicious... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The lightest brush of your lips Would be reason enough To lay aside my fears, And sell my life, to be with you, For the briefest breath of time." Oooh myyyy..Yes, I would say she is very lucky! A beautiful expression of your love. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
A heart that quickens and quivers like a butterfly's wings in the sun....ah! stunning imagery. The entire write seems to have been wings bursting from a chrysalis! Romantic and lovely, and I'm ...oh, just sighing...  ~ Klassy ~ |
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cinnabar Junior Member
since 2006-03-10
Posts 33Lot et Garonne, France. |
Oh, guys, if only she'd felt the same. Yeah, her again. Still, if it wasn't for her, I wouldn't be here, and I have to say it's nice being here with you all. I'm going to take some time later in the week to get to know you better. And thanks. Every kind word is another stitch in the torn seam. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Cinnabar, this is probably a silly question, but presumably you have had the good sense to show her your poetry, especially your poetry to her? If she doesn't respond to you then, then she is a stone statue because it is inconceivable that ANYONE doesn't respond to your poetry, ESPECIALLY somebody about whom you feel the way you describe in your poems. If you haven't shown her your poetry, then my advice is DO SO! Smiles, I'm not shouting, just making sure you heard me! - Owl |
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cinnabar Junior Member
since 2006-03-10
Posts 33Lot et Garonne, France. |
I think she threw them in the trash. |
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