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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-03-13 01:07 PM






~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-03-13 01:20 PM


excellent!!!




Martie
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2 posted 2006-03-13 01:27 PM


Marge/sis...How beautiful you see her with your camera's eye and your poets!!  
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Thank you Lee ... and MartieSis ... and BEFORE anyone else notices ... DANG ... I misspelled my OWN NAME ... that's what I get as a result of my oral surgery last week ... I think they extracted my EYE TOOTH !!
The agony continues ... but I had to write something !!
I 'think' they left my sense of humor,
but I'm too danged lazy to redo the piece, soooo ~*Marege*~ I'll remain !!!

Where IS my proof reader ????
OUT TO LUNCH !!!!

*Huglets*
~*Marege*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

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4 posted 2006-03-13 01:50 PM


Dramatic and totally captivating! Superbalicious! Gosh yer good!!!!

Love,
A Fan

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5 posted 2006-03-13 01:59 PM


I like it Marege dear.  Love, joyce
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2006-03-13 02:16 PM



I am blessed with friends who either can't/don't/or don't want to 'see' my flaws ... and that's A-Okay with me~
ESPECIALLY today !!!

*Huglets*
~*Maerge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

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7 posted 2006-03-13 02:41 PM


Dear Marge:  We love you no matter how you spell your name!  Hope your tooth problems go away!  Not fun I know.

Your words here are so meaningful and the photo is spectacular!  Enjoyed both immensely!

Love
Betty Lou

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8 posted 2006-03-13 03:23 PM


I love it  Marege!
it's just a slight imperfection..
and no one is perfect.
Yup..I think it was the eye tooth they worked on.

Seriously..this is lovely lovely.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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9 posted 2006-03-13 03:30 PM


Great pics and word Marge.  Powerful poetry!

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2006-03-13 03:54 PM


Does that mean you're cursed with nitpicky souls like me? LOL Well, too bad... You're not getting rid of me! *G*

Beautiful work, sweet lady! *S*

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11 posted 2006-03-13 03:58 PM


This was really good Marge. I hate dreary days but you make them better. Sorry to hear you had oral surgery last week. Sounds like you are still uncomfortable from it. Feel better soon.
Love ya,
Betty

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12 posted 2006-03-13 04:03 PM


Ooh, this gave me shivers! Loved this one Marge and hope you're feeling better soon!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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13 posted 2006-03-13 05:38 PM


I'm glad the old sky surrenders from time to time Marge and even better promises more ... the good old rain is so precious and at times comes so sparingly.

Very poetically put.  Goodonya mate!

Merv

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14 posted 2006-03-13 08:40 PM


What distaste we hold for the dark dreary days until we have a terrible shortage of rain!  Then even the loud thunder storms sound good.  I like that you use even the dreary backdrop to make a thing of beauty.

  God bless,

     Rae

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15 posted 2006-03-13 10:01 PM


Marge I hope you are feeling better soon.  I loved your poem as usual it was splendid to the eyes and senses.  Dispite your ails you still write the best poetry and always have such a beautiful presentation.

Huggs Kimberly


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16 posted 2006-03-14 12:05 PM



Oh Marege... it's so beautiful and I like the new way you spell your name. Creative. I hope you feel better soon.

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17 posted 2006-03-14 04:34 PM


Marge, this is just so pretty. And, the poem is fantastic, as always.
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18 posted 2006-03-14 05:10 PM


This is gorgeous, Marge.  I am in awe of how you took something somewhat sad and turned it around to an act of positive nature.   You are so creative.  Enjoyed immensely and will add it to my collection.

misce

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19 posted 2006-03-17 10:25 PM


Marge, your words and presentation are always a feast for these eyes
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20 posted 2006-03-19 05:41 AM


Marge~
absolutely breathtaking
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2006-04-02 01:11 PM



Thankee everyone ... we could use a 'little'
Damp of Sky here in Florida~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com   

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