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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The sadness that sweeps seems more permanent today maybe because the walls are now down and the shield has been put aside and the body can feel the breezes warm and cold, that change as they stretch their days above. There is no matter in mattering, been said before, and now once again leaving the wondering to wonder when all those ifs had been dismissed and just the living taking place. Never expecting the one or any to understand, not even the one of long standing for I sit now, disillusioned emptying the feel of my makeup wanting to try on something new... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
There is a change here..it is on the wind..enjoyed the emptyness of this..of the want and what if's ..dont i myself go through this all the time?..thank you..M. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
A beatiful poem nakedthoughts. It puts me in mind of a line from some old song I can't nail down. But the line say's "Theres got to be, more to love than this." :-) Maybe there is! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well M..why doncha? Try something a smidge on the different side... None the less, the pen flows well, as you so adeptly do. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"Never expecting the one or any to understand, not even the one of long standing for I sit now, disillusioned emptying the feel of my makeup wanting to try on something new..." I completly understand, except for the makeup part of course  but i know what it is like to have the utter feeling that no one will understand you, even the person you just spent years of you life with...A change is going to come... |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
indeed everyone needs someone to understand them at some point Seek thee out thr terror moon, seek thee out the chaos fire, seek thee out the Havyk |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
was just a bad week of school wondering if this is what I wish to continue to do... thank you for your caring responses M |
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