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Buttons Junior Member
since 2006-02-27
Posts 34 |
White grass and leap frogs Dense fog dreams Knowing you are me And nothings what it seems Pale you are alone.I’d give anything… To color you growing green. Green like the cedar and Australian pine Like mischievous ivy taking hold of strongest brick Casting its shadow, warming the mortar thick. Will I, in some dimension, ever become the straw within your brick? Intuitively, we are the bloodstream of each other’s grass We are the wanton lips of lifting fog; But we avoid connection although hidden in centuries of lovers logs. If powers be, Albino grass, Someday leap to green. Then may Home sweet home be seen. [This message has been edited by Buttons (03-12-2006 02:31 PM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I am impressed....this is excellent on all levels -- conception, creation and presentation. You're one frog who may make a big spash in this little pond! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Buttons Junior Member
since 2006-02-27
Posts 34 |
Thank you, Mr. Ratleader. You are very kind and funny. Buttons |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Will I, in some dimension, ever become the straw within your brick? Welcome to Passions!!! *S* I like this very much and look forward to reading more of your work. *S* |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"White grass and leap frogs Dense fog dreams Knowing you are me And nothings what it seems" Very powerful poem Buttons. Thank you. |
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