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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-03-11 07:48 AM


Smile me a Treasure

I’ve found a treasure in your smile
A source of pleasure and beguile
It showed the girl within your eyes
A little curl your mouth implies

And sighs went through my head in quake
The sighs that pleasure often make
That warmed my heart within its light
And even stayed my dreams at night

It turned my thoughts to rainbow hue
That chased the shadows from my view
It made me look upon the sky
And search for butterflies that fly

It stoked the heat of my desire
Stirred the kettle with its fire
Bringing back that boy I knew
So long ago so dim the view

So please, please smile a smile again
For these are flowers of my when


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-03-11 08:28 AM


Seymour~

Just for you
a morning smile
filled with joyous beguile
A smile to thank you on this day
for the poetic treasures
you send my way~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-03-11 09:37 AM



You've got our smiles every day, Sy,
because you leave a wake of welcome
in every poem.








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3 posted 2006-03-11 09:49 AM


Sy you make my smile brighter each and every day!
Indeed you do leave us such wonderful treasures.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-03-11 01:43 PM


Marge,
I will put this one on file.

Sunshine
Your flower is in my favorite place.

Nancy,
Your flower is on our tea table.

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5 posted 2006-03-11 02:34 PM


Seymour...Your poetry always flows so smooth.
Enjoyed very much...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-03-11 03:20 PM


Paul,
Thank you my friend.

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-03-11 05:51 PM



"So please, please smile a smile again
For these are flowers of my when"

Your poem is a smile flower all by itself Sy. Thank you.


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2006-03-11 06:02 PM


And you are a very sweet Lady.
scorpio
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9 posted 2006-03-11 07:49 PM


This made me smile too, Sy.  Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2006-03-11 07:51 PM


If every smile you have inspired is a treasure, then, you, sweet man, are kjillionaire.


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2006-03-11 08:45 PM


scorpio
Love your smile.

serenity,
Love you too.

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2006-03-12 08:13 PM



A smile for a treasure.




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13 posted 2006-03-12 09:21 PM


It stoked the heat of my desire
Stirred the kettle with its fire
Bringing back that boy I knew
So long ago so dim the view

Hmmmm, did you take this from
me....or might it just be a preview?
Pssst,  don't tell anyone, I won't!

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2006-03-12 10:01 PM


Earth Angel
You have a beautiful smile, I will treasure it.

Barry,
Mums the word.

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2006-03-13 09:07 AM


That was very sweet of you to say. Thank you, Dear friend.

Linda

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2006-03-13 09:14 AM


Linda
But you do.

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17 posted 2006-03-14 11:51 AM


Can you tell you have our hearts? *S* This is beautiful, my friend... as are the treasures posted as responses. *S*
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18 posted 2006-03-14 12:00 PM


words cannot express the hundreds of smiles you've brought to this rickity ol face....

thank you forever more

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2006-03-14 12:43 PM


suthern
Thank you sweety.

LeeJ
Love you too.

Klassy Lassy
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20 posted 2006-03-14 06:16 PM


And so we come from far and near
from the mostest to the leastest
smiling ear-to-ear!
Thank you, Seymour.

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2006-03-14 06:41 PM


Thank you, Klassy Lassy.

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