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Open Poetry #37

Jumper

cinnabar
Junior Member

since 2006-03-10

Posts 33
Lot et Garonne, France.

0 posted 2006-03-10 08:32 AM

Bareback
You ride my thoughts.
Your thighs press,
Gently,
On the flanks
Of my dreams.
I feel your hands
Through the reins,
Guiding the steps
Of my inner life,
And your warm,
Whispering breath,
Head upon my neck,
Urging me on
To the next fence.

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-03-10 06:32 PM

Oh Michael, this was gorgeous! I don't know how it's been missed. Pushing it back up to the top and thanking you for such a beautiful write.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Air Goddess
Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 108
Canada

2 posted 2006-03-10 08:10 PM

Beautiful! A classic!
A poem of poems!
I absolutely enjoyed this one...
mmm...do you have more?
Can hardly wait for your next!!

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2006-03-11 02:47 AM

This is gorgeous, I just love it so much. Wow, I look forward to reading you again

*is in awe*

Adding it to my library.

and then He created the horse...

cinnabar
Junior Member

since 2006-03-10

Posts 33
Lot et Garonne, France.

4 posted 2006-03-11 05:56 AM

Darn it! I knew I shouldn't have posted that one first. Now what am I going to do? Thank you so much for your words. I've been very nervous about launching my verse and you've given me some calm. I have other stuff, but nothing quite like Jumper. (I was very lovestruck when I wrote it, and haven't been since) Still time I suppose.
Michael.

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