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cinnabar
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since 2006-03-10
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Lot et Garonne, France.

0 posted 2006-03-10 08:17 AM


Pressed with a thumb
Into the warm, moist, loam,
The seed swells, fecund,
Tears open, pushes home.
Down into the darkness,
Up, and into the light;
Tugged by the sky,
Held beyond sight.
Rooting and springing,
Between night and day;
A mystery unfolding,
The heart of the play.
Then, as if it were nothing,
Folding back into clay.



© Copyright 2006 Michael Gryzna - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-03-10 09:37 AM


Cinnabar~
WELCOME to PiP !!

This offering is about as lovely as it gets ..
I felt the movement of Spring coming~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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cinnabar
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Lot et Garonne, France.
2 posted 2006-03-10 10:01 AM


Thanks, Marge. You're very kind. I'm glad to be here. Hope you read the subtext as well.
Cinnabar.

XOx Uriah xOX
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Virginia
3 posted 2006-03-10 12:49 PM


Great write !   Your words drew a perfect circle.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-03-10 01:02 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
An excellent entrance piece!
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2006-03-10 08:24 PM


Michael,

Welcome to Passions!  Any giant leap for one...

leaves many of us to follow one's footsteps.

Do not fear, write on.

And please, check your email for a very Special Greeting!


Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2006-03-10 08:30 PM


I enjoyed more than one gardening/seed planting layer in this. Welcome to Passions! Plant some more in here.
The Lady
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The Southwest
7 posted 2006-03-11 01:56 AM



You've certainly captured my
imagination Michael! Excellent
write. Welcome!


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