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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-03-10 06:30 AM



Fine Lines

I walk that fine line
of somedays "making my days"
and others bringing me down,
wondering if my future
holds the promises my mind
searches for.

It doesn't take much
to knock me offline,
too sensitive some days,
a fake strength on the others,
waiting to level off.

Life is a natural high for me,
when the sun is shining
and I leave my footprints behind.

Today is an afterday,
one of inner soul searching,
trying to hold onto those dreams.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-03-10 06:51 AM


"Today is an afterday,
one of inner soul searching,
trying to hold onto those dreams."

~ Your poems on inner soul searching are always soul-touching.

Hang on to your dreams and don't let go!


Linda


The Lady
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The Southwest
2 posted 2006-03-11 01:49 AM



"Life is a natural high for me,
when the sun is shining
and I leave my footprints behind."

You are an excellent poet. I enjoy your poems very much.

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Riding
3 posted 2006-03-11 02:41 AM


Loving it   

and then He created the horse...

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2006-03-12 11:21 AM


thank you for your responses...some days they are all I have

M

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