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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2006-03-08 02:41 PM


A flower in a vase
On the table in the hall
He came to see her pretty face
But she wasn't there at all
He left heartbroken.

Gloom


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-03-08 02:53 PM


aw, but does he try again later?
Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2006-03-08 03:00 PM



Whom my say, when mending a broken heart,
How long will the mending take
After being rendered apart

Perhaps a sequel will break

Look for Five point one
It might be done

Gloom

Buttons
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3 posted 2006-03-08 07:55 PM


If this wuznt so sad I say gimme five. Gimme five any way...  Nice poem.
The Lady
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-03-09 03:43 PM



Beauty! That one hits the spot!

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 2006-03-09 07:02 PM


So much said in so few words
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
6 posted 2006-03-09 07:30 PM


5.1
Professor Gloom
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7 posted 2006-03-09 08:08 PM


Thank you all
5.1 now posted

Gloom

icequeen
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8 posted 2006-03-09 08:31 PM


Breaks my heart this does.... going to look for 5.1


Caroline

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