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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: What ever Is As morning light puts out the night And dew drops shower early morn I rub the dreams out of my sight And watch the golden shafts of dawn I listen to the wind instead Whispering most the early noise The birds nearby that have not fled The ones that watch and wait in poise I smell the odor of new birth The flowers lifting up their heads The seeds that burrow through the earth The perfume that the breeze has spread I feel the power of the sun The chill is gone the warmth is here I think on all this life begun And weigh my thoughts of interfere What makes me think I’m fine chambray? Above all other earth’s gourmet |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sweet man... you are one of the treats life gives us... and we are grateful! *S* This is beautiful!! *S* Reading it took me out of this dreary cubicle... and into appreciation for the bounty each day holds. *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I smell the odor of new birth The flowers lifting up their heads The seeds that burrow through the earth The perfume that the breeze has spread I feel the power of the sun The chill is gone the warmth is here I think on all this life begun And weigh my thoughts of interfere" Wow..such a wonderful uplifting write dear Sy! Very much enjoyed this morning's post. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Today you are a butterfly.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, I grant you too a butterfly. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
SMOOCH, my friend... thank you! *S* |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
A smile write/right! Good morning to you  Thank you for those sunny thoughts. I'm chilled to the bone this morning. A cup of hot chocolate sounds like heaven! And you are fine Chambray, my friend. Feast on life. You deserve it! ~ Klassy ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern   You are a Klassy Lassy. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I don't know what this looked like before the editing, but it's a beauty now! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Seymour, Let me tell you what. I don't mean to sound like a rapper, but you know how to rock it out. Like you said: The chill is gone the warmth is here But you're still chillin. Nice one as usual. Cheers - Ed “True absurdism is not less but more real than reality” |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ratleader It wasn't that bad to begin with but it is much better now, thank you my friend. Ed, Appreciate the read and reply, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"As morning light puts out the night And dew drops shower early morn I rub the dreams out of my sight And watch the golden shafts of dawn" You've begun my day with beauty and warmth. Thank you sir. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you my Lady. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...Pure poetry from a great poet. Your words go beyond describing the coming of a new day, they paint such a vivid picture that the reader envisions. Thanks for sharing your vision with us...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, A very warm comment, I thank you. |
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