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Open Poetry #37

Pick this

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2006-03-07 08:59 PM

PICK THIS

Around to this
And back to that
I see no change to
The image you portray

To leak at least
An lack at most
And nothing more
The thoughts I think
Seek and sought
Will come to naught
Turn quell and or
Say no more

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

1 posted 2006-03-07 11:15 PM

This write makes me think. I like that but I am a bit confused as to what you are saying. I like it though.

Huggs Kim

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-03-07 11:23 PM

I enjoyed it also. It's like being taken around and around...weaving in and out.

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2006-03-20 10:50 AM

Good read

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2006-03-21 02:52 AM

very playful

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