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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-03-07 08:09 AM


We Are the…

We are the star within the star
The very wonder and the char
The changing and the history
The coming of what is to be

I find self consciousness a stage
The turning of another page
The very changing in the climb
The processing of grime by time

It’s really all we have to know
For even stars are timed to go
But cognizance can be a mess
It is to me I must confess

This wakefulness and bring of dream
We are not milk but close to cream
But change has naught to do with grace
And much to do with time and place

I’m ready for this rivers bend
The star I live until its end


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-03-07 08:18 AM


we are so complex yet so mundane, married to place and time...Sy, your a wonder....
Morning

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2006-03-07 09:22 AM


SeymourLove~

YOU ARE the poetic star that burns brightly for us all to word-wish upon~

Love ya', my friend~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-03-07 10:40 AM



Star
Twinkle, twinkle,
Sy the Star.
What a wonder,
That you are.
Star


Klassy Lassy
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4 posted 2006-03-07 03:32 PM


"We are not milk, but close to cream"....Ohhhh!  I could read this poem again and again.  It's accepting and wondrous and rich!  And you sparkle in the writing!

~ Karen ~

Robert Frazier
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5 posted 2006-03-07 03:37 PM


i love this!  appreciate your poet "voice"

Robert

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-03-07 05:10 PM


LeeJ,
You are very sweet, thank you dear.

Marge,
You are a love.

Earth Angel,
So glad you are well enough to be here.


Karen,
I treasure your reply.

Robert,
And I surely appreciate you comment.

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