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Skyfire
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0 posted 2006-03-07 03:07 AM



Go ahead and
describe to me
the darkness
I see right now
tell me how
fogged in I feel
and how silent
everything is


© Copyright 2006 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
Free_Spirit07
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1 posted 2006-03-07 05:14 AM


WOW and again i am reminded that its not how many words you use . . . its what the words are! Intresting write - left me thinking

x0x0
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Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2006-03-07 05:41 AM


Yes!! Sky...you wrote it exactly how I feel it...Wonderful write here hon.  
The Lady
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3 posted 2006-03-07 05:47 PM




Powerful work Skyfire!

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-03-07 05:55 PM


I think you did a pretty good job of describing it yourself!

Boy, could I ever feel and see your abyss.

Sending an understanding and comforting hug,
EA

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5 posted 2006-03-07 06:33 PM


I don't think you need anyone to describe this for you, Skyfire. Hope all is well with you.

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

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6 posted 2006-03-07 09:08 PM


Was listening to a song only a moment ago that said, "I can make mistakes myself just fine,"  so I offer no advice, and shall just hope your heart is held open to the light, and I send you a hug.  

~ Karen ~


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7 posted 2006-03-07 11:37 PM


I look for your poems
all the time
and I am never
disappointed.

xx

farewell the ash-tray girl

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8 posted 2006-03-08 04:42 PM


*hugs*

Great writing Rhonda

Andrew

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