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Crosswalk

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Huan Yi
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Waukegan


0 posted 03-06-2006 10:28 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


A glimpse
Became a scene
Though it had  no
Such ambitions

Yet something in the mind
It was passing through
Said Hello

You know
It said without word
You remind me
Of something someone
I knew before

I too became
No more than a dream just passing through
To wherever we’re bound to go


© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
icequeen
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since 12-09-2001
Posts 649
FL USA


1 posted 03-08-2006 02:56 PM       View Profile for icequeen   Email icequeen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for icequeen

Beautiful, this is...  I too have had these kind of moments, but am usually too busy to reflect on them. Thank you for taking the time to do so, and in the process, reminding me that I should be more observant... as you are.

Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

Edward Grim
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since 12-18-2005
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Greenville, South Carolina


2 posted 03-08-2006 03:06 PM       View Profile for Edward Grim   Email Edward Grim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Edward Grim's Home Page   View IP for Edward Grim

Well done, Huan Yi. I always enjoy reading your poetry. Cheers  -  Ed

“True absurdism is not less but more real than reality”
- John Simon

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3 posted 03-08-2006 03:10 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Oh you do have a touch....there are many poets whose work I like, some I like and admire....but very few I envy!

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Drauntz
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4 posted 04-23-2007 04:12 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

must be Blueskaya.

beautiful poem.
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