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Open Poetry #37

Love... The Real Way

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2006-03-06 08:07 PM

One last night
With my thoughts in the air
This is the last night
I let my thoughts wonder there

Thought I lost something
That would never again be mine
But was reminded today
She wasn’t my only sublime

I can find love where needed
There are many fish in the sea
And I know there are others out there
Who would try to really love me

Maybe someone I want
With traits that really attract
And when I say “I love you”
It will be through complete fact

I won’t have to seconded guess
I would come from the hart
And she wouldn’t get mad
When I needed a day apart

I will sleep without a problem
Tomorrow’s another day
I will find someone out there
Who will love me the real way

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2006-03-06 10:47 PM

Simple yet sincere
It deserves to be noticed.

Yet . . . what is
the real way?

John

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-03-06 11:25 PM

Excellent write Matt.

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

3 posted 2006-03-07 02:22 AM

It changed from night to day very fast. But the over all poem had a nice flow - love to read more of you poems *thumbs up*

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Free_Spirit07
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

helenadepp
Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 59
durham, england

4 posted 2006-03-07 02:18 PM

I agree with Free_Spirit07. This had a lovely flow throughtout.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2006-03-07 02:26 PM

Deep_Inside
Enjoyed the read.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2006-03-07 11:29 PM

Enjoyed...when we receive what we don't want, it helps us to define what we do want...James

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