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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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hovering sighs of a woman bubbling tender green time, dripping rich in the veins lineage, moist with rose flush thrashing towers, winking like happy gossip on a mission swims, the old days stretching out in all directions beyond my window being faithfully here in unique rhythmic production mending bones that had been so long broken, by forest grizzly’s everything grows over old battlefields where shadows run across time illuminated by arms firmly nailed to a forever oak, waiting on the threshold of prayer gypsies…someone intimate like hidden music, nobody knows whispering the jasmine of solitude like the sun coming up wherein morning owns clandestine proof, where I am willing to risk everything I own like a newly waxed floor, without the mop there would be longing to shine feeling the ocean moving through my soul my heart and mind contagiously becomes intrinsic art reflecting beauty, in all forms within a spiritual home town carnival where all is round and open and I am in love with the dew moisture of this circle of ambition metaphysical nuance and this eternal cup of wine full of fire and ice inbetween I drown it is so good to be teased by the grain of enthusiasm and so, I ride the pounding hoofs of morning secrets with the dawn people and their teachers [This message has been edited by LeeJ (03-06-2006 12:58 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
like the sun coming up wherein morning owns clandestine proof, where I am willing to risk everything I own Lee, your writing is so profound and always moves me. Sometimes, I believe we share the same mirror.  Well done gal. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
this is wonderful Lee. always such a pleasure to read your gifts. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Mirror, mirror on the wall who's the thinkingest of them all. Enjoyed |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I love the way your thoughts come to light, the gentle waves of spirit healing and dispelling shadows of the heart. It also makes me look forward to the sunny mornings of spring and blue sky, and earth awakening with bud and bloom. Thank you for sharing those loely nuances.  ~Klassy~ |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Wow LeeJ! Great, I loved it! It had all the moves of a Prima Balerina. :-) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Lovely Lee! Your pen dances on point like a ballerina! "I ride morning secrets of pounding hoofs with the dawn people and their teachers" ~ Indeed you do! ~ and you are also one of them!  Hugs with love, Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"hovering sighs of a woman bubbling tender green time, dripping rich in the veins lineage, moist with rose flush thrashing towers, winking like happy gossip on a mission swims, the old days stretching out in all directions beyond my window being faithfully here in unique rhythmic production mending bones that had been so long broken, by forest grizzly’s" This makes me think of our friend, Liz and her dancing ways. You are lovely, Lee!! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Your images are extraordinary. I need to come back here more often...for inspiration and education! Patricia |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
The first line really grabbed me and then there was this: "and I am in love with the dew moisture of this circle of ambition metaphysical nuance and this eternal cup of wine full of fire and ice in between I drown" Great work Lee. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
LeeJ., These lines stopped me in my tracks! They are stunning! "everything grows over old battlefields where shadows run across time" misce |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aha... so you DID have a good time... I read it in the last lines... all of the above was whipped cream and sunlight! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"feeling the ocean moving through my soul my heart and mind contagiously becomes intrinsic art" Picturesque, to say the least. Very nice write Lee J. JL  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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