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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-03-06 07:05 AM



Soft In Heart

There is grace in her beauty
as she walks soft in heart
each day an existence
needed to rise to

She will emerge, a butterfly
leaving a trail of naivete behind
for others~~

Too much to evaluate,
significance
reigning tears...

Sisters, our guardian angels,
leading us, reminding us
of who we are,
where we came from
and where we shall go...

for you
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2006 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-03-06 09:51 AM


MzWynter~
This is such a delicate word-beauty~
What a lovely *gift*~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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The Lady
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2 posted 2006-03-06 04:45 PM




Yes...

"Sisters, our guardian angels,
leading us, reminding us
of who we are,
where we came from
and where we shall go..."

Well said.

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3 posted 2006-03-06 05:10 PM


Yes, they are angel!  I've found some of them right her on these blue pages, too.  Lovely write, M-Lady.   ....jo
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4 posted 2006-03-06 07:16 PM


often times angels come to us when we need them most, and often, they are found here..
on these pages of blue...  

One of your best ever, M.  

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5 posted 2006-03-07 02:42 PM




and smile...sometimes she rises a little late these days...


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6 posted 2006-03-07 04:18 PM


M~

   Your words flow so gently and sincerely.  Beautiful writing and thoughts.

       cathy

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7 posted 2006-03-07 04:59 PM


Beautiful Maureen.
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8 posted 2006-03-07 05:17 PM


Maureen,
Well I've had my candy for the day.

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9 posted 2006-03-07 06:01 PM


The whispered softness of your pen's voice should grace a Hallmark card.


Linda

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10 posted 2006-03-07 06:02 PM


Mureen ejoyed these fine of gentleness..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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11 posted 2006-03-08 09:49 AM


So very lovely! *S*
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12 posted 2006-03-08 12:11 PM


Just beautiful, and heartfelt.  I always wished to have had a sister, or brother and can't imagine the loss of one.
nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2006-03-09 06:25 AM


Thank you everyone...my time is taken up right now, mostly being tired..

I wrote this for Serenity (and for any others who are in troubled times and/or missing their sisters, knowing that there are better days ahead...getting that little push from mine)

Maureen

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14 posted 2006-03-09 12:15 PM


Thank you, mo.

Easter will always be a bit different now I think.

Thank you remembering that I have things on my mind besides the obvious. You are truly a joy of a friend to have and a comfort to me.


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