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Fade Junior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 38on a (temporall) plane |
Four years long tears flow you did me wrong came home to find you gone all alone this pain is strong One year old our child your heart is cold twofold sorrow so bold cant hold cant watch her grow ive cried ive prayed every day you've been away lose faith i just cant stay in this place i see your face in every thing i see i see with you and me the way it used to be cant believe just cant conceive... |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Welcome Fade, Theres healing and strength and love to be found and shared here at PiP. I hope you find all these things in abundance! God Bless! :-) Although the world is full of suffering , it is also full of the over coming of it. Helen Keller |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
welcome to PIP, this was nicely done, looking forward to reading more of you |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
D.E.~ Welcome, welcome, welcome to the friendliest poetry forum on the entire Internet~ In our circle there are many hands that will reach out and welcome you and your emotional pourings~ Have faith ... though a separation such as you pen hurts like heck ... there is a new light waiting to be followed for you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
fade Welcome to Passions...I wish you the best. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh fade... so much sadness in this poem. Welcome and I hope it gets better soon. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Fade... my heart goes out to you. I must say, I do love the way you've written this piece. It gives it a good staccato feel, which I think lets the reader feel some of the sharpness of your pain. Excellent entrance, and welcome to you. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This may be your first post....but it is oh-very-definitely not your first poem! Welcome aboard! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Fade, I’m not about to assume anything because I've written the most depressing poems when I was happier than an Irishman at a keg party. I do think that you wrote this wonderfully. You have a real talent. Welcome to PiP, I’ll look forward to reading more of your work. Cheers - Ed “I like living. I have sometimes been wildly, despairingly, acutely miserable, racked with sorrow, but through it all I still know quite certainty that just to be alive is a grand thing”. ~Agatha Christie “True absurdism is not less but more real than reality” |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Welcome Fade Very nice write. I know I feel like tis on some days. Very touching Thanks Rich |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Fade... some sad words here and you have arrived at the best place to sooth away your hurt..great first post..hope to see more..welcome to pip..oh and thanks for the words.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Welcome to the blue pages  This is a terrific place to share your heart..keep writing and sifting, we'll keep you company  hugs, g "Home..is for free expression, not for good impression..." |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
well done , ~poetry flows when the time is right ~ In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was well written, and the flow was good too! |
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