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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2006-03-05 07:37 PM


I was so confident once
The world became my ride
and the sky was my sunlight
but the moon, then came a tide

Some say the moon only comes out
when the darkness comes to us

So I stared wonder eyed and awed
For water swept across these lands
I found my path and continued
walking along the ocean's white sands

Some say the moon only comes out
when the darkness comes to us

I found mountains and I climbed them
And I swear towering so high
I thought if I climbed them
I would be able to touch the sky

Some say the moon only comes out
when the darkness comes to us

So came the sun and dried the earth
and I returned to where I came
reuniting with my fellow wodes
nothing in my heart was the same

Some say the moon only comes out
when the darkness comes to us

Even though the moon only shows
because there is no other light
to out shine it from all glory
My eye still starve for its sight

Some say the moon only comes out
when the darkness comes to us

But isn't it something to see


Dedicated to my hero who stole my heart long ago.

-Juju

[This message has been edited by Juju (03-05-2006 10:02 PM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-03-05 07:55 PM


"But isn't it something to see..."

Yes, indeed, it is.


icequeen
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since 2001-12-09
Posts 633
FL USA
2 posted 2006-03-05 09:07 PM


I really love this. It has a poignant feel to it, and I like the flow.

Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2006-03-06 09:37 AM


Thank you,

-Juju

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