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0 posted 2006-03-05 02:29 AM


I Know I’m Going To Cry When I Fall In Love
By: Noah Eaton
3/4/06

Clearly,
I can see,
there are millions of paths,
over the mountains and across the valleys,
I’ve fallen seven times,
stood up eight,
trying to find my way into your arms,
how the heart can ache,
but imagining your smile makes the pain abate.
Looking around,
I have found,
the best antidote,
is yearning for something profound.
These times,
I’ve cried,
are because you’re always beautiful,
and I’m lonely only on the inside.

I may not have found you yet,
but I’m closer than I am yesterday.

I miss you outside my dreams,
burning for each night’s reconvene,
it makes my heart dewy-eyed.
I feel your ghost offer me warmth,
when it’s you I cry out for,
angel,
I know I’m going to cry,
when I fall in love.

Soon enough,
my love,
we’ll make possible,
all that was undreamed of,
soon enough,
hand in glove,
there used to be a time,
I felt I’d never feel and have true love,
but hearing you breathe,
hearing you sing,
for the first time made me believe,
that God has a plan for you and me.

When the world tells me to give up,
hope tells me to finish the race to you.

I miss you outside my dreams,
burning for each night’s reconvene,
it makes my heart dewy-eyed.
I feel your ghost offer me warmth,
when it’s you I cry out for,
angel,
I know I’m going to cry,
when I fall in love...
.
.
.
.
.
Soon you won’t be lonely when you cry,
I’ll kiss away all your tears.

I miss you outside my dreams,
burning for each night’s reconvene,
it makes my heart dewy-eyed.
I feel your ghost offer me warmth,
when it’s you I cry out for.
I feel your heart skip a beat,
when I’m talking in my sleep,
it feels so good it makes me want to cry.
I keep trying to find my way to you,
tangled up in you,
angel...

I know I’m going to cry,
when I fall in love...

...thanking God I found you...
.
.
.
.
.


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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iliana
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1 posted 2006-03-05 02:46 AM


I did, Noah...I did cry.  Angel Man, I hope you are saving all your precious love letters to give to her someday.  This should be the one you gift her with on your wedding day, maybe?   ....jo
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2 posted 2006-03-05 03:11 AM


Man so deep, so nice ........ awesome

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3 posted 2006-03-05 08:18 AM


Noah,

Goodness...beautiful as always. I really do believe you are going to find true love. How could you not? Any woman would be very lucky to have you by her side. Never give up...it truly is only a matter of time.

Loved this!

Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-03-05 08:40 AM


Dear Noah, that truly was a beautiful song of love from your heart.

"Climb every mountain! Sail every sea! Follow every rainbow!" (Sound of Music)

~ To find the girl for thee!

If you still don't find her ~ may she find YOU! Flowers

With lotsa love,
Your friend,
Linda

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2006-03-05 11:08 AM


Noah,

It is my fondest wish that she is everything you dream of.

Beautiful song, my favorite of yours.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

dgvarner
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6 posted 2006-03-05 12:50 PM


"I’ve fallen seven times,
stood up eight,
trying to find my way into your arms"
LOVE THAT LINE!
AND THIS:
"I may not have found you yet,
but I’m closer than I am yesterday"

AND MANY MORE!!

much enjoyed...What an awesome gift for when you find your angel!
hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

Martie
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7 posted 2006-03-05 01:30 PM


Noah

"Soon enough,
my love,
we’ll make possible,
all that was undreamed of,"

Your dreams of love always make me smile and want to hug you.     Don't loose those dreams as the days go by...keep on believing!

Tracey
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8 posted 2006-03-05 10:43 PM


A dream that will one day become a reality. You have so much to give her, and I'm sure she'll appreciate your beautiful words and your beautiful heart.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

The Lady
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9 posted 2006-03-06 12:05 PM




"how the heart can ache,
but imagining your smile makes the pain abate"

And imagining your tears on the day you fall in love makes my heart smile.

LeeJ
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10 posted 2006-03-06 12:34 PM


beautiful my poet friend, I would probably cry so hard, I'd chase the poor guy away...
Your a wonder Noah...

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