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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN 
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Rain is falling rain is falling, falling all around. Rain is falling rain is falling, such a soothing sound. Thunder rumbles thunder rumbles, somewhere in the night. Thunder rumbles thunder rumbles, followed by the quiet. Lighting flashes lighting flashes, on the windowpane. Lighting flashes lighting flashes, one moment now in frame. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
I think I clicked Then I get the feeling of the rain, then the thunder, followed by the lightening This poem may not appeal to every one and I surprise myself by wanting to add my comment here. Style can be mixed, yet balance and feel are part of nature Normally poems written in this form do not appeal to me . However this one did win me over. Good job in attaching nature to the page a poet who cares |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good morning, bubbles. I wrote a repetitive thunderous poem once...something akin to this...maybe I should dust it and bring it out of the archives...it may be one you would enjoy. Sometimes a little repetition can go a long way. You did not overstep the sensation here. But please, keep dancing. We still need more rain!  |
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