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Do Not Think
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Do Not Think |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Do Not Think Remind me, please, that it will be all right to write of pursing lips, gently releasing air through hoop of soapy ring, blowing bubbles come this Spring to let my eye watch iridescence ripple thereon fine skin so clear as if within thin sheen lay some dream or wish, or want, so near but do not think for a moment, no that I have forgotten those gifts I know that lay within this heart, just so. Remind me, please, that it will be all right to write of budding leaves before my sight of promises that mist this air of that we knew which once was there to let green eyes watch ever plain sounds of laughter pass some storm which screens sure, sounds ever keen so blackness isn’t what it seems acknowledging, this loss of norm but do not think for a moment, no that I have forgotten those gifts I know that lay within this heart, just so And for all that was, and will ever be, holds to this breast a thought, a note, this love, this light, unconditionally. ~*~ For Enchantress & Nightshade... and for memories. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"but do not think for a moment, no that I have forgotten those gifts I know that lay within this heart, just so" On the contrary, sissie...it is you that I know will always remember!  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I remember a parting with someone, nothing romantic of course, but a friend I will not forget, and knowing it was the last time we would be in the same place, because after years of friendship our lives were taking us in different directions, to different cities in different worlds. Just as I was leaving, I turned back and said, "Oh, and one more thing, Astrid, never forget--" She turned, expectant, and I said, "That's all....just never forget." "I won't," she replied, with a smile I won't forget. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'll be there, blowing bubbles with you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes it will be all right.. come Spring. Thank you Karilea.. for this, for your compassionate heart.., for everything. |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
" blowing bubbles come this Spring" At first, I thought it to be a poem about me! He/he Very nice, VERY NICE Sunshine, a very deep writer, plowing the sentences, under, churning up beauty, me thinks are you such a writer. Sharon |
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Spot Junior Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 45CA, US |
very nice. I'm new, and this is the first one I've had the chance to read. It made me glad I joined. "to let my eye watch iridescence ripple thereon fine skin so clear as if within thin sheen lay some dream or wish, or want, so near" I loved these lines especially; I just was drawn into the image. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bless you Karilea. heart hugs, Chrislane |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Wow......man i aint never seen anything writen like this before....this is an awesome way of writing aye....so so so cool  i fink its perfect i cant see nothing wrong with it  x0x0 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Couldn't wait until tomorrow to respond to this one, my sweet SIL! I started pulling out lines and phrases...and couldn't settle on just a few, 'cause this whole symphony is absolutely full and wonderful! It fits my mood to night....just so. ....jo |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
An interesting style of expressing this right to write words written Sure at this moment one poet in words thus smitten a poet who cares |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(: -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Those gifts will never be forgotten... misce |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
You will always remember the gift... but please remember too, that you ARE the gift, and thank you for posting this gift here. 'Tis wonderful my dear  Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. - Persian Proverb |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
sometimes KJ...this is just how it has to be...and no, don't think...not for a single second |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Well, i think, it is perfectly alright. As for your heart, you have a heart of gold. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
blowing bubbles… budding leaves… it will all be all right and we know you have not forgotten… Wonderfully done Sunshine. |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
In the Light of Sunshine shadows flee. Great write! Hugs, Kathy |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Oh~ what would it be to blow bubbles, dream irridescent dreams, to watch budding leaves in spring, or to laugh with out memories and friends? You've penned pure delight! ~ Klassy ~ |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
To watch your gift of words from your thoughts is like watching a new print in film developer solution. The print emerges little by little, showing your heart. Beautifully written. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Sunshine, I want to say everything will be okay, but I know you already know that. Some hurts are to deep to expess, some losses can't be replaced, some lives can't be cherished enough, and the sun will always shine! God Bless! :-) |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
There is something divine in this writing...I was called home...literally, I had to leave work to pick up an ill child. He doctor appointment is in an hour...and I came here first. I needed to read this more than you will ever know. Love, Patricia |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very nice When I only have a few minutes to spend on this, You are surely one of the one that I look for! adagio |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
reminding you: it's way more than alright! Hugs, Robert |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
where would we be without the prose of others..this was indeed heartfelt and beautifully written as only you could do.  |
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