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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN 
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You may watch the darkness flee at the break of day; yet, dawn is not a witness here, till doubt has passed away. You may walk cross forest floor and hear the wind at play; yet, peace is not a witness here, till doubt has passed away. You may hold her tenderly And lavish her with praise; Yet, love is not a witness here, till doubt has passed away You may call on heaven's throne And mean the words you pray; yet, God is not a witness here, till doubt has passed away. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Excellent poem bubblesleave, doubt truly is a destroyer that must be overcome. Welcome! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I will ditto Steven - an excellent first posting and what a debut into your membership at Passions! Welcome! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your words are so true, bubblesleave. Welcome to Passions! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome to PiP ... I know I will enjoy reading more from you~ I greatly enjoyed this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Spot Junior Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 45CA, US |
wow. very nice, and completely true I'd say welcome to PIP but I think I'm even newer than you are. I loved reading this |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's quite an entrance, bubbleleave~ I thoroughly enjoyed your poem~ Welcome to Passions!! |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
yes same here very much enjoyed  Im so looking forward to reading more from you....oh and welcome to PIP  x0x0 |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Welcome bubblesleave! I enjoyed your poem. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
As one who struggles with many doubts, I have to love this piece. I'm glad you came here to post with work like this! Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
Human emotion stripped of it's selfesh pride equals TRUTH! GREAT JOB!!! Hugs, Kathy |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: Im impressed. That doesn't happen very often. I'm so glad I came across this. Thank you for the blessing. :: bows :: |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
This is all very true. Excellent writing. |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Thank you Songbird, and "Blessings" Sharon |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed and so true Hope |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Thank You so much Hope! and, may I add: I am your fan..a true , as, your poetry rings so true and ....wonderfully clear! |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
Sharon, I'm so proud of you on this night! You are much more than you think, so THINK:::: Kathy |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"God is not a witness here, till doubt has passed away." Absolutely right, bubblesleave! Wonderful poem - wish I could get here more often to read all and everything. |
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