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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2006-03-03 08:34 PM


(Here's another poem I wrote about five years ago.....and my vows and love for my dream girl are as pure as ever, as I long to be annointed by this loves first kiss!

(hugs) I just know it has to be the most beautiful feeling in existence, and I long to feel love's magic shining in my yearning heart like a little girl in a candy store can't wait to taste a new flavored candy!)


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If I Had You
By: Noah Eaton
3/29/01

Years pass me by,
staring at your beauty in my dreams,
you are everything to me,
and how I want everything fervently
wanting so badly,
to sit beside you for once,
and see you smile,
even if it was just for a little while.

If I had you,
I promise that I would
never let you go, honey,
I would recite my poetry to you,
and hope you want to forever be with me,
I would sit under the stars with you,
and I could look into your crystalline eyes,
and I could catch that spark of affection,
feel your lovely light

It never felt too bad running on empty,
until I first dreamed of you, my darling,
it is so aggravating feeling your love
but being hoodwinked by fantasy,
you’re a beautiful angel
I still can’t reach,
praying God will help you find me.

If I had you,
I would hold you close,
listening to every word you say,
I would carry you in my arms,
tuck you into bed,
and my love for you would never fade away,
I would whisper those three words
to you before you fall asleep,
I would kiss you on your forehead
and softly caress your silkened cheeks

Oh love,
how I’ve dreamed of you for so so long,
falling in complete happiness with you,
and then you are gone,
I hope the time is near,
when I can feel your love so true,
can you hear me say, “I love you!”

If I had you,
I would hold your hands
and we would dance together
We’d never have to cry
or long for each other again, never ever,
and whenever you would feel
sick, sad, or uneasy,
I will always be there beside you,
comforting you,
sharing a mutual understanding.

If I had you,
I would hold you in my arms,
where we'd be kissing each other,
feeling your warm body over mine,
making love to each other
as true happy lovers,
and every night after,
I would keep you warm
as I cover you with my sheets,
while your warm body
keeps me warm at night,
your soft hands over me.

If I had you.......I would love you.


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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iliana
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1 posted 2006-03-03 09:29 PM


Sweet Noah Angel....I hope she is not far off.  She will be one very lucky, loved lady!   ....jo
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ErikaStaples
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3 posted 2006-03-03 10:10 PM


awe, tear!  That was such a loving, passionate, and genuine poem.  Whoever she is, she's a lucky woman.  Awesome poem!

Hope can die in an instant
but forever dreams carry on.
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4 posted 2006-03-03 11:58 PM


...and if she had YOU, she'd be one lucky girl!

A man like you who has so much love to give, deserves to be loved like that in return!


Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-04-2006 12:22 AM).]

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5 posted 2006-03-04 06:46 AM


this is absolutely beautiful~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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6 posted 2006-03-04 12:27 PM


This has a beautiful flow to it and it was a lovely read.
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