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Salty Blues |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643
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they said it wouldn't matter tapping on the inside of a can with a head full of tears begging for dimes possibly dollars with a harmonica in his hand sweet notes salty blues not knowing if it was going to rain sitting steady on the stoop hat turned up holding dreams watching feet take off to busy schedules and all he's got to do is stay right where he is |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Liked this. It really sparked my attention. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Wow - so few words to paint such a vivid photograph in my mind... excellent write, I love it! Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Again thank you both. Your comments make my day |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"hat turned up holding dreams watching feet take off to busy schedules and all he's got to do is stay right where he is" Page you have a wonderful talent for showing us slices of life. I love the way his hat holds dreams. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thank you Kate. I try to give the ready some sense of reality in my poems. It is good to know that I am succeeding... |
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