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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-03-03 04:23 PM



Enchanted by eyes
you sedate me
with. Weakening my
muscles, inviting sudden
ravenous hunger, to
feast on love,
every secretion of
it from your
hallowed alter body.
Invisible thaumacratic powers
vivify me, entice
me, as night
flowers to a
moth, beyond delirium.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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1 posted 2006-03-07 09:01 AM


For shame! Thou shalt not employ thy full vocabulary to the writing of poetry!

Nicely done, fella....this deserves a bump for word power alone!

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The Lady
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2 posted 2006-03-07 05:46 PM




"as night
flowers to a
moth"


And another bump for being captivating.


Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-03-07 05:57 PM


Your captivating poetry vivifies and entices!


Linda

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4 posted 2006-03-07 05:58 PM


Ed Thank you for the lift on this one..i think i needed it..

GR...

Lady your words are kindess indeed..thank you..

GR..

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2006-03-07 06:00 PM


Linda you Snook in as i was replying to ED and The Lady...thank you for your words of kindess..always nice to recieve words from you..hope you are well and getting weller!!if such a word exists.LOL..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Klassy Lassy
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6 posted 2006-03-07 06:22 PM


A friend showed me a lunar moth once...exquisite!   A moth to a flower...softly intoxicating.

Karen

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7 posted 2006-03-07 06:28 PM


Karen thank you for your very nice reply..a lunar moth?...How very interesting...was it beautiful? .moths can be amazingly colourful...thanks ...

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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Gaia
8 posted 2006-03-07 07:10 PM


a beautiful write, Phil
but what does thaumacratic mean? or is it thermocratic?

Goldenrose
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9 posted 2006-03-07 07:19 PM


Kacy thank you for spotting the thauma cratic word..didnt realise i had written that until your eagles eyes noticed it..should be ''Thaumaturgic'' which means miracle powers..thank you for your reply Kacy..

Goldenrose.


Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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10 posted 2006-03-07 07:48 PM


aha! thanks for that clarification
to make sure I know what you REALLY said
LOL, miracle workers, eh?
yes, I can picture that.

A Romantic Heart
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11 posted 2006-03-09 05:26 PM


The eyes do it everytime~ LOL!

ARh xxxx

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