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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2006-03-03 12:24 PM



You Perfected Apologies

I believed you everytime
It becomes clear to see
All the numerous times
That you had fooled me

The past I look back on
So convincing were you
Trusting your friendship
I had hoped it to be true

I had given you my heart
Trusted you with my key
I guess you feel amused
You were able to fool me

You perfected apologies
Lines with a loving blend
I guess I will never know
Why you had to pretend

HopeĀ©2006
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http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/97/poem_822242.html

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-03-03 12:39 PM


Such a melancholy write Hope..
but, as always,..so well written.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2006-03-03 12:45 PM


Thank you Nancy for your kind comment in reply , yes when I write I  guess my emotions do show through
Hugs Hope

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
3 posted 2006-03-04 11:50 PM



I love the way your emotions show through Hope. Good write.


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