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PazSqual
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2006-03-03 09:53 AM



I Promise

I made a Promise
Not to break my heart again
I hope I am right


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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-03-03 11:43 AM


Good to read you Paz.  
A few powerful words here...no guarantees, and I guess to promise no pain means risking no joy as well.  You do have a way with words Sir.

Hugs,
TD

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-03-04 11:36 PM




Short and very thoughtful. I enjoyed it.


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