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MUSEconnieSEconnie
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since 2006-02-28
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0 posted 2006-03-03 01:54 AM



    
I CALL HER DAUGHTER

AND SHE CALLS ME MOM

WE ARE NOT RELATED

BY SCARLET DROPS

OR DNA

RATHER WE ARE CONNECTED

HEART TO HEART

HAVING SOLIDIFIED OUR UNION

AS PARENT AND CHILD

IN HER 17TH YEAR

SHE LOST BOTH HER PARENTS

IN THE SAME YEAR

AND WANTED TO FIND

A SAFE PLACE TO STAY

AWAY FROM THE DRINK AND DRUGS

OF HER PEERS' LIVING SITUATIONS

a CLOSE FRIEND TOLD ME

OF HER PLIGHT

WE MET AT A FAST FOOD JOINT

I RECOGNIZED HER RIGHT AWAY

AND KNEW SHE WAS SUPPOSE

TO BE WITH ME

I THOUGHT PERHAPS

FOR JUST A SHORT WHILE

THINKING SHE WOULD

MOVE ON WITHOUT ME SOON

BUT SHE WAS SO WORTH MY TIME

THAT I FORGAVE HER IN ADVANCE

I WATCHED HER WORK

AND GO TO SCHOOL

AND GET HER CAREER

IN RECORD TIME

    

I WATCHED HER

FALL IN LOVE

AND MARRY HER PRINCE

    

AND STILL SHE STAYED...

WE HAVE LENT OUR SHOULDERS

SHE AND I

  EACH TO THE OTHER

OVER THE YEARS AND STILL

SHE SHARES HER CHILDREN

    


AND HER HEART FREELY

    


WITH HER FOSTER MOM

A BARREN WOMAN

WHO NEEDS HER MORE

THAN SHE'S EVER NEEDED ME...

[This message has been edited by MUSEconnieSEconnie (03-05-2006 10:44 PM).]

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2006-03-03 03:03 AM


HOW WONDERFUL!  WHAT A SPECIAL LADY YOU MUST BE....THIS STORY PROVES IT!
poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
2 posted 2006-03-03 03:57 AM


SHE IS EVERYTHING SPECIAL

THAT I DO KNOW


a poet who cares

MUSEconnieSEconnie
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since 2006-02-28
Posts 74
california
3 posted 2006-03-03 05:42 AM


THANK YOU ILIANA AND POET.  SHE IS THE REASON I STAY ON THIS PLANET!
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2006-03-03 06:00 PM


Connie, you are both truly blessed and worthy of each other.  I am glad you found each other, but, as you implied, that was written in the stars.

- Owl

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2006-03-03 06:19 PM


THIS IS SO TRULY BEAUTIFUL. I ENJOYED THIS VERY MUCH, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING.  
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2006-03-05 12:02 PM




"I RECOGNIZED HER RIGHT AWAY"

"CONNECTED HEART TO HEART."

AMAZING, ISN'T IT CONNIE? NO MATTER HOW OUR CHILDREN COME TO US WE RECOGNIZE THEM RIGHT AWAY. YOU CANNOT BE A CHILDLESS WOMAN... YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAUGHTER. I LOVED THIS POEM SO MUCH. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS WONDERFUL STORY.


Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
7 posted 2006-03-05 05:51 PM


Connie...this is so heart-warming.  I have a son that is my son-of-heart in the same sort of way, although he is no longer in my life....I miss him.  
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
8 posted 2006-03-05 09:20 PM


VERY COOL STORY...IT'S FUNNY HOW WE SOMETIMES THINK WE ARE DOING SOMETHING FOR SOMEONE ELSE, BUT END UP GETTING SO MUCH MORE IN RETURN

HUGS, G

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched."  Lord Byron

MUSEconnieSEconnie
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since 2006-02-28
Posts 74
california
9 posted 2006-03-05 10:48 PM


DEAR 'THE LADY'
THANK YOU FOR BRINGING UP THE 'CHILDLESS' PART. I CHANGED IT TO 'BARREN' A WHILE AGO BUT POSTED AN EARLIER VERSION. I HAVE FIXED IT.  JUST TELLS ME YOU ARE A GOOD REVIEWER AND VERY OBSERVANT.
LOVE
CONNIE

I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS.  MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES

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