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Quad_dune Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 26Ontario ,Canada |
A scratcha cut a gash in my heart. For with this blood I make this art. For love can be dangerous thing. But love is more then just a fling. Love is a special gift to us. But in this love do we trust? Is there only one true love? That god has sent from up above? Or is there more for us to see? Or maybe we should just let be? I say again just one more time… A scratch a cut a gash in my heart. For with this blood I make this art. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
the first and last lines pack a punch there... and yes, love is a very special gift. I believe we should follow our instincts where love is concerned  Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Interesting write thank you.. Goldenrose Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I enjoyed the read. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Struggles, change, growth...but where would life be without love? We could only aspire to dying... A vividly thought provoking poem! |
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