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FNG
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0 posted 2006-03-02 05:01 AM


A sparrow adored,
Kept in captivity indoor.

Inner contemplation,
Bugged me for compensation.
For keeping it in captivation.

Letting go,
A delimma.
To love thou or thee.

To part is to love,
The best for us both.
I'll bear with the boredom,
In exchange for your freedom.

Fly with the wind
Soar into the clouds
for comfort awaits.

Released,
Still as it can be.
It didn't know what freedom is,
Felt safe in this tiny lease.

Regret,
A beautiful bird destroyed,
By my selfish plot.


No beauty was left in a caged bird as it's the prettiest at flight.

[This message has been edited by FNG (03-02-2006 05:34 AM).]

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