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Evening Song
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Evening Song |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Softly, rippling under twilight's stars, a Dobro strums, and Spanish guitars pluck from evening love's old sweet song where fingertips touch, and indigo throngs a cool white moon as she dances by, her slippers silver in a satin sky. She carries a torch of emerald fire and glides through the deepening blue. As she kindles my heart, a child hums, and, suddenly... I'm thinking of you. ~ Klassy Lassy ~ August 7, 1996 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms KL...you pluck such tunes on the instrument of your pen most enjoyed this one |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhKaren~ Your Dobra sings to me~ I adore the beauty of this entire piece~ You have a soft touch with word-paint~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my, what a lovely song to awaken to this morn. Beautiful indeed dear Karen. ~Hugs to you lady, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
Yeat another New classic from one of my top favoritie poets on this site. Well done KL.  |
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Quad_dune Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 26Ontario ,Canada |
Relaxing! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so softly beautiful. Nicely done! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"a cool white moon as she dances by, her slippers silver in a satin sky" I hear your beautiful song Klassy. It makes me want to sing. More, oh... more... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Tranquil and nostalgic . . . sets me dreaming and remembering . . . - Owl |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
KL....this is wonderful! I like your style.  ...jo |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Breathtakingly beautiful... how talented you are with imagery and at giving your reader chill bumps!  Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Daark, some music is just made for plucking heart strings. Glad you liked this. Marge, hugs! Thank you for sharind with me. The Dobro made beautiful music. The one I heard that night was built by my uncle, a very talented man. Enchantress, so happy to have you stop by mornings or otherwise. Thank you! Gentle Spirit, thank you, too. desert spike, I am delighted you like my poems well enough to come back again. Quad, I need to stop by your pages soon. Glad you could kick back here! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Desert spike, I am delighted you like my writes well enough to visit again. You comment made me smile. Quad, it's nice to meet you. I'm guessing you are a fan of dunebuggies and dirt bikes... Anyway, thank you! Gentle Spirit and The lady, it's nice to get to know you both a bit through your writing, too. Thanks for coming by. (A soft write for a soft evening Lady, by all means, sing. The world needd all the joy it can handle! *squeeze* |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Owl, it sets me dreaming and remembering, too. This write came was inspired by a summer's evening concert. It holds some tender memories for me. Jo and Caroline, Very kind words...thank you. I'm happy to share. Hugs, ~ Karen ~ |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Beautiful! |
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