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kokopeli creed
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kokopeli creed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I wish I had a "something else" a secret that was mine alone. But that? It wouldn't be like me. My gods have made this difficult answering my prayers of seed "send to me all that I need" and little did I know the bleed of all I never knew and greed is blessings most superfluous like too many shoes and I am dancing here with two left feet and I must learn to make this work preference of a bare foot as my fingers grab the sky laughing kokopeli beat-- as every day I bury lies of all I was just yesterday and celebrate the child in me that managed to survive. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
'two left feet' or not... you dance beautifully... *smile* Hugging the child in you tightly... You know I love you, Karen...  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
It is humbling to read this; you set an example for us all, dear friend........*hugs*....jojo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Be careful playing with the flute player. He can be dangerous. *wink* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dance, Koko, dance. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I likes the child-like in ya, serenity--full of play and life; cool write misce |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Know what I think the secret is? Maybe, you just need to dance to the beat of a new flutist to find that seed? No two kokopelli humps are the same you know?  This was a wonderful read m'friend with a great lesson for all within. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
K? I wouldn't have missed this one for the world...thank you for giving us all the lesson to maintain that inner child... and you m'dear? DANCE beautifully.  seek the flame within yourself |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
I love the beat of this. It has just the right cadence to go with these words. Great work Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen "as every day I bury lies of all I was just yesterday and celebrate the child in me that managed to survive." I celebrate too! |
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