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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2006-03-01 04:04 PM


I seek my farther dreams
that are sometimes hard to miss
my heart speaks to you
in a moment of a bliss

I see you coming near
my beautiful mate
look at the imaginary in me
you have began to create

I see the southern stars
as I stare them at my sight
the stars look so beautiful
especially at night

I think of this as a dream
full of dafter
my heart ponders
and goes through laughter

If you don't know what I mean
just look inside your heart
you will know that special moment
for it will part


Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2006 Laura - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2006-03-01 07:09 PM


This was a very nice poem here..thank you for your vision and words..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-03-01 11:30 PM




Greatly enjoyed Angelheart.

Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
Posts 368
jax
3 posted 2006-03-02 09:19 AM


long have i dreamed of watching the stars with my loved one. she knows who she is heheehe. i loved this poem laura it was sooooo beautiful. keep up the great poetry love love you and no one else
desert-spike
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since 2006-02-01
Posts 194
TX/USA
4 posted 2006-03-02 01:58 PM


Truly beautiful, and rightly spoen, that was.
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2006-03-02 02:00 PM


Liked this and the picture!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2006-03-02 02:02 PM


Lovely lovely piece.
So good to 'see' you!!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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