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Spartacus

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 03-01-2006 02:45 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Was it not good
However crudely made
To eat ones bread
In an open field
Free and proud

To face the sun
To love the light
And warmth it gave
To minds no longer chained

Man turns to dust
And less more than soon enough
The wheel goes round
Yet never finds
Those it left behind

Was it not good
In what little time we had
To stride the road
Into our fate


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on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 03-01-2006 09:13 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

The wheel goes round
Yet never finds
Those it left behind

How very true. *S* I like these practical moments of peace... courage shines here, too.
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2 posted 03-27-2006 11:52 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Was....and will be...and this poem needs to be seen by many.

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3 posted 03-28-2006 01:13 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

*thumping my chest*

and no, not even kidding

spartacus...my inner warrior
Ixtab
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MEXICAlpan de las tunas


4 posted 03-28-2006 01:29 AM       View Profile for Ixtab   Email Ixtab   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ixtab

This is enchanting...
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